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[Nah: Part 1]

Drop the Gay Jokes

You don't have to be funny by saying you're a faggot or anything. Also make the plot roll out more smoothly, not with up and down all over the place. It was okay, make a remake.

Rylord responds:

Well, Matt wrote most of it, and he believed that it should be written for the humor of the internet. Personally, if I say "You’re a fag" to someone, I'm not commenting on their preference of sexual partner, but rather telling them that their pissing me off.
As for the story running smoother, when we sat down to do recordings, we said "Forget this, let's improv...” I believe that this is the reason the story and dialogue do not run smoothly.

I have no plans to remake the cartoon, as getting everyone together to do recordings is too much work.

Thanks for your review